Proposals

 

ENG 106: Composition 2

Lesson 3: Evaluation
Sept. 9-13, 2002

Objectives

By the end of this lesson, you should be able to do each of the following without consulting notes or other resources:

  • Identify problems or obstacles that call for action.
  • Construct a proposal that addresses these problems or obstacles.
  • Define or identify relevant terms.

Assignments

Please complete the following assignments before coming to class on Tuesday:

Read Chapter 12 of Everything’s an Argument and excerpts from John Winthrop’s A Modell of Christian Charity (108-112) and Roger Williams’s The Bloudy Tenent of Persecution (194-195).

Prewrite some material for your proposal.  Focus on exploring problems, obstacles, and solutions related to the subject you are exploring.

Activities

Our class activities this week include the following:

 

Think Fast: React to John Winthop’s and Roger Williams’s proposals.  What problems or obstacles are they addressing?  Evaluate their solutions. 

Presentation: Proposals (Professor Canada)

Cooperative Learning: Discuss the arguments with your classmates.

Discussion: During this time, we will discuss the insights and questions that have emerged during our reading, “Think Fast” exercise, presentations, and cooperative learning.  I also will show you how to post your first essay on the World Wide Web. 

Workshop: Use various prewriting strategies to explore a subject in the exploration and colonization of America.  Discuss your ideas with other members of your group.

Think Again: Using what you have learned or reviewed in this lesson, revise your evaluation.  Make sure that this essay has a claim, evidence, effective topic sentences, well-organized paragraphs, ample support, and an engaging style.

Conferences: While the rest of you are working on the “Think Again” exercise, I will meet with two of you in one-on-one conferences.  During this time, I will review some of your writing, orally quiz you on lesson objectives, and field your questions.

Announcements: We will wrap up this lesson with announcements regarding upcoming lessons, as well as other relevant subjects.

Names and Terms

Make sure you know the meaning and significance of each of the following names and terms:

  • proposal
  • problem
  • obstacle
  • solution

Resources

You can find more information about the subject covered in this lesson by consulting the resource listed below:

Everything’s an Argument contains extensive discussion of proposals.

Updated September 5, 2002
© Mark Canada, 2002
mark.canada@uncp.edu
 

Introduction

Congratulations!  You have completed your first argument in this course.  You will continue to use much of what you learned in our first few lessons as you study and write other kinds of argument.  In this lesson, we look a second kind of argument called a proposal.

Discussion

The Purpose and Structure of Proposals

One of the most common kinds of argument, especially in the fields of politics and business, is the proposal.  The author of a proposal argues that a person or a group should or should not take a particular action.  A member of the United States House of Representatives, for example, might propose a law to control the sale of handguns, or an advertising firm might propose a new plan for promoting a company’s products.  Even a couple of friends who advise you to live on campus are making a proposal argument.  The word “should” is often a clue that the argument you are reading or hearing is a proposal: “The United States should take military action against Iraq.”  “Our corporation should move its headquarters to Raleigh.”  “College students should not work more than 20 hours per week.”

In making proposal arguments, authors often draw on other kinds of argument.  Take the example of some friends’ proposal that you live on campus.  These friends may begin by arguing that residence halls are less expensive and more convenient than off-campus apartments; in doing so, they are making an evaluation argument.  They then may go on to argue that being close to the library and having quiet hours will cause you to get better grades, thus making a causal argument.  They might even make an argument of definition by claiming that living in a residence hall is an academic experience, a king of college course in itself.  Thus, to support the proposal claim that you should live on campus, your friends have actually used three other kinds of argument.

Creating a Proposal

When planning a proposal, you should begin by looking carefully at the evidence surrounding an issue.  Often this issue will involve some kind of problem: handgun violence, for example, or declining profits.  In other cases, there may be no obvious problem that needs immediate action, but rather the usual sorts of obstacles that nations, organizations, and individuals encounter on their way to their goals.  When you enrolled in college, for instance, you probably did not already have a problem regarding your place of residence.  Still, you had to decide what action to take: to live on campus, to rent an off-campus apartment, or to commute from home.  A proposal that you live on campus would take into account your goals and the obstacles that you will face, and it would spell out the reasons why living on campus would help you to overcome those obstacles and achieve your goals.  Thus, the prewriting you do for your proposal might include listing problems, doing a clustering diagram of obstacles, and freewriting solutions.

Once you have explored the topic through prewriting, you are ready to begin writing your proposal.   Begin with a claim that proposes some action or the avoidance of some action.  Outline a discussion of the relevant problems, obstacles, and solutions you explored in your prewriting.  Finally, convert the points in this outline into a draft in paragraph form.

As always, you will want to spend a lot of time revising your argument.  In particular, make sure that you have clearly stated a claim that proposes a course of action, accurately described relevant problems or solutions, and thoroughly discussed a realistic, feasible solution.

Conclusion

Over the next couple of lessons, you will continue to work on your proposals while we discuss some strategies for interpreting and using sources.